s l o
w l y
over the head of diamond-
shaped mountains,
a volcano put to sleep
against a sky stained
blazing orange to blue.
A final hot cup
filled with Kona coffee.
A final mango smoothie
made to order on the veranda.
A final glance at the surfers,
backs glistening, dripping,
salty and muscled—their boards
jamming through waves
so clear, like glass, like crystal,
like sweet ice before it's shaved
into a cone—one last taste
before the gravity of the mainland
bears down and pulls.

My favorite part has to be when you spaced out the word s l o w l y. It really adds something to the poem.
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